The Photographic Society of America
Photo Travel Division
Photo Travel Digital Study Group 10
Maker: N Sukumar
Round Number 3
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Image 1
Waiting For The Flight
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Judy Burr Comments and Ratings:
I love the leading lines of the lights and the fact that you converted the photo to B & W--I think that adds to the impact. I feel that the row of seats dominate the picture and don't show the story you want to tell--waiting. I would love to see some people sleeping or looking tired/bored. The other thing that would make a good picture is to focus on the ceiling--there are some great patterns there. That would not work as a travel picture, but would do well in other areas. I think the "rules" do not allow cloning.
Impact 3 technical 3 ½ composition 3
Interest: Changes needed Technical: Above average Composition: Changes needed
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Image 2
Laundry Day
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Judy Burr Comments and Ratings:
I love this picture which has great color and composition. The women form a circle under the trees and that all holds the picture together very well. I really like the action of the 2 women holding up the items they are washing.I find the picture a bit bright and think it might be better if it were cropped on the right.
Interest: Above average Technical: Improvements helpful Composition: Above average